FALLEN MOON

It's really interesting from what I've read! The story is fast-paced and there are many fleshed out characters. Once you learn who everyone is, then it'll begin to really ramp up as you get invested in them. The author has a very, very clear image of the scenes he's writing. But that is this novel's only downfall. The descriptions are too heavy. I feel that they're too precise even for novels, meaning that there's too much miscellaneous descriptions that just float about. It feels more like a novel rather than a webnovel, which isn't an insult but rather the writing style. I think that it would actually be more clear and concise if you decreased the descriptions and focused more on the flow of events because the flow is there and it's good!

Okay, so even though I had just started reading, the story and the world that this is in, hooked me. Yeah, it's the stereotypical "Oh, this guy killed my parents, so I'm gonna enact revenge" but so far it doesn't seem to ride on that notion too much. The characters so far have been written well, where you can have an understanding of who the person is and how they'd carry themselves just by dialogue, and I love that. We haven't gotten much about the world so far, and I hope that gets better, or we learn more as it goes along, but besides that... Pretty solid story, can't wait for it to get bigger and more in-depth. Good work so far, but like, if you could update a bit more often so it doesn't feel like we're waiting an eternity, that would be nice.

Ok I will start with... I should be ashamed for taking so long to read this! Up to chapter 4 and I'm addicted, hook line and sinker! You got me hooked in and I am in love with the story and the Characters! You deserve a feature and a contract if you don't have one already! please don't stop writing!

This kind of novel's usually isn't my Jam but I think this was really worth reading. The introduction painted a cool and interesting world, it really felt like a "Thriller". There was a feeling of suspense and excitement that made me want to read more, up until there were no more chapters,

the story deserves a 5 star review for sure! from the beginning I was intrigued by the vicious descriptions. characters are well fleshed out and I can't wait to find out what happens next! love that it's set in Japan and thus an Eastern setting. Gambatte, author!

So far, I actually like this story a lot. The writing is really well done and you can get a beautiful image about the world, characters, and settings. The details im every scene really are great and thr characters are relateble unlike a lot of webnovel books. I highly recommend readers to check this one out. Aweseome job author.

劇透

I absolutely like this, i usually buy books with like these genre. I havent read the whole chapters yet but the first page is already interesting. I better recommend this to someone i know, they will surely love this. keep it up author

劇透

With the chapters that have been published, you can get to know the characters pretty easily because the story is fast-paced which many readers appreciate. Once you've learned the names and the 'history' of the characters it makes it a lot easier to become invested. There is always a wanting to know more, "Why's he like this..', "Isn't he the guy who.." and that's an amazing aspect because I haven't been bored for a single moment. I will say though, every description the reader's given allows them to visualize exactly how the writer wishes the scene to take place and while that is an excellent quality in novels, it can be as much of an advantage as a disadvantage. I think if the aim is to have the reader imagine all the scenarios, it's done very well but with too much wording behind it. The descriptions are vivid but they can also be short and in the end, it should still create the image the author wishes to portray. Aside from that, I've found nothing in this story that has made me lose interest. I really enjoy it.

 that every description given to the reader helps them to imagine exactly how the writer desires the scenario to unfold, which, while an amazing trait in novels, can be both a benefit and a problem. If the goal is to make the reader visualize all of the eventualities, I believe it is accomplished admirably, but with far too much words. The descriptions should be vivid, but they may also be brief, and they should still convey the impression the author wants to convey. Aside from that, there hasn't been anything in this narrative that has piqued my curiosity. It's something I truly like.