Empire of Winter: Sam's New Dawn (GOT FF)

not a good fic for anyone that knows anything about game of thrones you only learn of the mcs name in chapter 9 or 10 he's the Lord of nothing cause that's never explained he goes to winterfell and seemingly becomes the Lord of the north again no explanation nothing this fic is a mess

it's not great but for a starting writer it's a good start but please work more on the character development it feels it's too fast paced.[img=recommend]

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It is a decent start .I am just little picky person so I do have problems here lile in first chapter we don't know what he is lord of and where he is accept the North and it feels little too fast paced . It would be better if you explain qhere he is in detail and also about his systsm and what timeline he is in. ( may be in auxillary chapters) but It will be better as just diving in head straight doesnot make me feel right .Though it is still behinning and I know that you will improve so not too harsh from me .

Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯

good concept and idea, but poor execution, and there is no good plot and storyline.. it is only a narration and a medicore one at that. It has potential, but you need to iron out the details. I suggest reading a few good books in the same genre. (not necessarily ff but storybooks)