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Dropped One Piece: Marine

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First time writing a fanfic. I will try to update everyday, but it might change since right now am on winter break. What if Luffy had an older brother. What if that older brother was then taken by Garp to the marines and trained to join then. Follow Sage on his journey to rise through the ranks of the marines and become strong to protect his brothers Warning I do not own any character of one piece they all belong to Eiichiro Oda

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Chapter 1Chapter 1

In a village located on dawn island, you can currently see two boys. One who's trying to get the other to come down from the roof of a house while the other seems like he's about to heal something out.

Sage: "Oi Luffy come down would you.and don't say what I know your gonna say cause Gramps is coming." Luffy: "I AM GONNA BE THE PÍRATE KING!!!" Sage: "Baka don't say I didn't warn you."

Luffy: "What do you mean Sage"(Looks at his older brother with a look of confusion on his face). Sage: (Starts to sweat a bit on his back) "Cause gramps is right behind you." Luffy: (Freezes up and starts to turn his head to look behind himself slowly)

Garp: "What did you say you brat" (Hits him in the head with a) {fist of love} Sage: (sigh) "What did I tell you Luffy." Garp: "Oi Sage did you forget how to greet you grandpa or do you need a fist of love to."

Sage: (Stands up straight, saluting his grandpa) "Hey gramps." Garp: (hits Sage with a) {fist of love} Sage: "Ow why'd you hit me for gramps I didn't do anything."

Garps: "You are supposed to watch you brother." Sage: "I know and I've told him, but he doesn't listen gramps. I try to hit him but whenever I do it doesn't hurt him like when you hit him, so I can't do anything. It ain't my fault." Luffy: "Itai"(it hurts)itai(it hurts)

Garp: (hits Luffy again) Sage: 'Grandpa always says that he can hit Luffy because he loves him, but whenever I try it doesn't work, is it because I don't love him enough? But am his brother and I love him a lot(not in that kind of way you pervs) I'll ask him about it later.'

Garp: "Come on you brats let's go see Makino."

[To the bar]

Sage: (Sits down on a empty stool)"Hey Makino-neechan." Makino: "Hey Sage, how are you doing." Sage: "Gramps hit me in the head because Luffy won't shut up about wanting to become a pirate." Makino: (giggles at Sage pouting)"Okay Sage, but don't you want to become a pirate as well." Sage: "Yeah, but Luffy could at least keep his mouth shut when gramps comes around, but no it seems he likes to get hit be gramps fist of love."

Luffy: (Luffy sits down on the stool that Shanks usually sits on) "No I dont." Sage: "Uh-huh then then why do you keep saying your gonna be the pirate king at loud whenever gramps is around you Baka , at least don't be so loud about it like me."

Garp: (Eyes on fire and standing behind Sage) Sage: Crap 'am fucked I said that to loud didn't I.' Garp: "What'd you say you brat." {Fist of Love} Sage: "itai itai Makino-neechan save me."

Makino: (Giggles) "Okay Garp thats enough you know you shouldn't be hitting them it's not going to do anything." Garp: "Maybe if I hit them harder, they will get it through their thick skulls that they will be marines, not pirates."

Makino: "Either way Garp you shouldn't be hitting them, they are just children. Here you Sage Luffy have so some juice"( Gives then both a cup of orange juice) Sage: "Thx Makino-neechan." Luffy: "No, I want what Shanks is always drinking."

Sage: 'Baka why'd you say his name' Garp: "Don't you ever say Akagami's name you brat"{Fist or love} Makino: "Garp what did I just say." Luffy: (Holding his head with some water in his eyes) "Yeah tell him Makino-neechan." Garp: "Okay but I came here to tell you that am gonna be taking the kids and putting them with the Dandan."

Luffy: (shocked)"What no I want to stay with Makino-neechan." Makino: (sigh) "Your going to leave them up there with the bandits." Garp: "Yup, so let's go brats." Sage: "Fine(whispers) stupid geezer. Bye Makino-neechan I'll come visit later when I got time okay." Makino: "Alright then bye Sage." Luffy: (crying, snot coming out his nose) " I don't want to leave, I want to stay with Makino-neechan."

Garp: "Come on you brat let's go"(hits him in the head). Luffy:(Still crying) "Okay then you stupid geezer." Garp: "What'd you say you brat want me to hit you again" Sage: (sigh) ' Sometimes I wonder how me and Luffy are even related sometimes'

Luffy: "Fine, bye Makino-neechan, When Sage-niichan comes and visits you I'll come with him okay." Makino: "Okay then bye Luffy bye Sage goodbye Garp." Sage and Luffy: "Bye Makino-neechan" (waving at her)

Garp: "Goodbye."

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