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Douluo Dalu 2: Legend of the Heavenly Wolf

作者: iLyannn
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Mo Xie, the Millennium Genius, was hunted by every government organization that was after his projects. Betrayed by his lover and watching all his family and friends die, he dropped nuclear bombs on his enemies and died in the explosion. Reincarnating in the world of Douluo Dalu, he discovered that he had a powerful bloodline and gained several mysterious techniques. Now see how Mo Xie creates his legend in his new life! Note: Please read the tag before reading. - English is not my first language, so there would be grammatical mistakes in this story. - Please give my story a proper review. - I accept a suggestion, but no spam! PS: I don't own the cover, and any characters or world in this story, except for my own OC (Original Character)

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2 :Monster Academy

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NutAllinMyBut
NutAllinMyButLv13NutAllinMyBut

Awesome start, definitely has the potential to become the best douluo dalu 2 fanfic. Very good grammar, hardly any mistakes. Character is likeable and interesting, looking forward to his development. Overall great start, I hope it gets seen by others so the author starts getting more support. Keep up the awesome work!

iLyannn
iLyannn作者iLyannn

Me: As the author, I have the right to be shameless and give 5 stars to my fanfic! Someone: Author, you can't do this! Me: Shhh! Here are some chapters on brib-cough-appreciation for reading, then go play in the corner. Somebody: ... Errr... Please give my fanfic a chance so I can see how I'm doing on this journey. Thanks in advance!

UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12UndeadBeing

Review: Writing Quality has some grammar mistakes. Stability of Updates is pretty good. Story Development is forced to the point of me making sarcastic remarks such as: Of course it's weakened alone and you just so happen to kill it in one shot, or Obviously the spirit beast wouldn't attack you since you cleeeearly don't have anything it wants *cough Life Energy cough* and of course the panda would give you its ring and spirit bone because you helped it with something. Character Design, The Mc is bland and lacks a certain spark that comes with most reincarnated novels, I'm not bashing your ideas but, it just doesn't entertain or capture my attention. World Background, It would be rated lower but the world is douluo dalu so meh, back on track... we don't get any information other than what's going on right in the Mc's bubble, so we don't know the time and/or what part of the story it is, This isn't good for newer readers and makes it not feel like the douluo story. Summary: Writing Quality gets a 4 star, Stability of Updates gets a 5 star, Story Development gets a 3 star, Character Design gets a 2 star, and World Background gets a 4 star. tl:dr: minor grammar mistakes, good update stability, semi-forced plot, bland character, and very little beginning information on where the story starts. Overall: 3.6 stars

Rayashi
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Bella1000
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Very Good!!! 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️ 🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️🤩💞🤩❤️

Dr_Absent_Minded
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Sebastym
SebastymLv11Sebastym

This fanfic is perfect, although a bit too much potential of the protagonist and a complaint about when the first ring turned black, I only remember that it was described as having some black in small parts...........

DarkSama
DarkSamaLv2DarkSama

Pretty Good but I feel like mc is too OP and after a while the writer might stop updating cuz he made the mc a little too OP I like how things are going rn but welp I hope the writer doesn't stop updating

Yang_Guo
Yang_GuoLv15Yang_Guo

Actually one of the best in this category that I have read. Good character development overall and enjoying the growth of the main character's ability.

LegendaryPrinny
LegendaryPrinnyLv4LegendaryPrinny

Loving the story, just wish you update more. granted until a few days ago there were daily updates and i hope that comes back either way keep up the great work :)

JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4JapaOuO

It's a very well written Fan Fiction, however I didn't find fault with the plot! The only thing I think is bad is that it has low viewing! But I will faithfully follow!

book_worm10
book_worm10Lv3book_worm10

Awesome start, definitely has the potential to become the best douluo dalu 2 fanfic. I hope the updates become much faster. MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!

ILHREXYI291101
ILHREXYI291101Lv4ILHREXYI291101

you should re write this but instead of it being douluo dalu 2 make it when tang san reincarnated and have the mc take tang sans opportunities.

Jose_Figuer
Jose_FiguerLv2Jose_Figuer

Muy buen fic, es el mejor de douluo dalu 2 que eh visto, la historia es muy buena y las lanzadas de capitulos tambien, lo unico mal es solo un poco la escritura pero todo lo demas bien.

Huoyuhao
HuoyuhaoLv11Huoyuhao

Finally a douluo 2 fanfic :) [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

DarkSama
DarkSamaLv2DarkSama

is it dropped y are there no more updates i was looking forward to reading it u know im pretty dissapointed........................................................

deadimp
deadimpLv14deadimp

great story cant wait for more chapters really enjoying how the mc has to work for his desires not just given them. thanks for writing this fan fiction

kawai_chan_1854
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Awais_Malik_1584
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dippmann
dippmannLv14dippmann

It would deff be nice if this started back up again It is definitely top 10 douluo dalu fanfic for sure And its about dd2 I liked the character and how the story was going It felt like it had the right building towards an op character

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