Dark Hero in Tate no Yuusha

Guys... it's genuinely good stuff, I have reading this novel for over three weeks, and I love the dedication of this new author. In the first two weeks author made a lot of grammatical errors in each of his chapters, his writing is completely different from before, he made very less errors in recent chapters. I can understand what he wants to convey easily. And he is making a new kind of storyline in Tate no Yuusha, which is pretty interesting so far. I am recommending this to the people who want to read some relaxing and refreshing fanfic.

The writing quality is not bad even though there are some grammar and spelling mistakes. This fic is also updated frequently but the story is not good. Idk why I’m reading about a 6 year old for more then a couple chapters. The pacing is weird and it’s boring to read I’m surprised there has not been a lower review sooner. The time Skip chapters really sold how little I wanted to read anymore.

this one is a good shield hero fic, a pretty good and well made fic for a new author and i can see ur improvements throughout the chapters. i dont have problems to ur story updates cus u update regularly. morsans character development is neither good or bad, i jut found it in the middle, also mc shouldnt feel guilt to others stupid decisions. the downside is ur writing style, u should break the lines like 3-4 sentences each paragraphs cuz anymore than 5 becomes a hassle to read, i believe this must also be the reason why others found this fic boring. you should also avoid too much info drops, others will just basically skip read it. u should also avoid multiple chapter as a time skip. well this is all my honest opinions and hope for more incoming chapters

This is one of those underrated fanfic out there! The story progressing steadily in a good way. So you all try check this one out, I think it worth your time to read.

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Lets give it a read. I like what you said author and i will read this now and see how it goes. Im prepared to use eye bleach if necessary but its good that rather than writting without care you trully try to improve. Now... Whats a morsan?. Also, while its to bad your mc dosnt has Raphtalia as a lover. Lets see how it goes. I will suppose the mc¿s hârêm is all original characters, but i would like to recommend saving Rino(adventurer girl who was from Motoyasu party who later is sold as slave by Malty) if its not to late.

It is great. I can not wait for the heroes to arrive. Also do we have love interest in sight or nothing for now? Anyway hope to see a lot more chapters.

This novel really surprised me, I liked it, now it's in my top 7 best, I recommend everyone to read it.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙🤙👏👏👏👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

What can I say other than it’s a good Fanfic. I already like the Rising of the Shield hero, but disliked the other idiot ‘heroes’. However, I really liked Naofumi, so as long as the main character gets his slave harem and never gets NTRd while being a bro tk Naofumi, I am happy. As for the Patreon, I think you can ask for a little more as a dollar for what you are offering seems cheap. Some have patterns more expensive and offer less after all.

so far it's been a great success for me and will like to know more .Thanks for a great story [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

This is one of the good underrated novels, i personally like it, i don't see anything bad with, the world building is a bit lacking and there should be a bit more focus on the thought of the side characters, at the moment they feel a little bit like npcs they talk only when mc talks, you should write some of their thoughts sometime, overall this is an underrated novel, i've seen compleate trash on the rankings and this isn't one of them

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Your overall writing quality is good. It's just, you should break a line after 3-4 sentence max. It becomes difficult and annoying to read 6-7 sentence in one line. Everything else is alright. Just keep improving and one day, who knows you might just became The Guy.

So far so good, new kind of fanfic, story progresses steadily without any awkward moments. I can tell in recent chapters, the author was cooking something... I hope it won't ruin the story progress that I enjoyed so far. It's sad, that it's so underrated... I hope the author won't drop this. I know every author needs money at least enough to fulfil their daily needs, but I want you to finish this story despite that.

good story line with good potential and don't give up on this story

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I'm enjoying the story, one question who will be the romantic interests?[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]