Crossing The Divide

It's a shameless author writing about his story so he can reach 10 reviews! My novel is about a young boy who has lost everything and decides to train under an old expert searching for immortality. There will be humor, training, fighting, and more. I hope you give it a chance and enjoy!

This novel is just starting out, but I could safely say it is going in a good direction. Not only do we have a compelling protagonist with a fabulous mentor but we also have a great xianxia world to explore. This is defiantly going into my library just want to it age like good wine and get back to it.

As far as I have read, the novel seems great. The characterisation part is amazing, and the plotline seems to be flowing great as well. There are few grammatical errors, but those can be ignored. The writing style is the part I found the best, and keep up with the good work!

The name of the story reminds me of Linkin Park song -- the divide. totally unrelated, but yeah this can be a theme song for this novel. the writing quality is impressive.it's better than mine <3 story development is good. I love mc and world background. keep it up, author! I will look forward to move chappies.

I like this story It reminds me a bit of my own its just unlike me the author can write out a conversation while I just have everyone grunt and nod. I wonder if you can make the boy fall on to the path of darkness and have him be a demonic cultivator make him also abandon his humanity that would be nice. Then make the old man a bit on the good side like an angle but both of them dont hate each other insted its still a master and student relationship. They will have an unbreakable bond as they break the spines of alwho oppose the. Sorr my evil side came out a bit its a good story though.

Okay, so this is my review for this story! :D The story is great. Reading it was engaging, fun and entertaining to read. I especially like the portrayal of the MC's mentor. He seems like a fun one to write, and it shows in how the author writes him in the story. The MC also seems promising, but due to the pacing of the story, his true character has yet to shine since he was still in the middle of being trained. I'm sure that he'll his chance in the future though. There is only one flaw that I can see in this story so far, and that is the minor grammar error. Nothing really to worry about, because I'm sure it can be easily fixed as the writer gets better in the future. All in all, I give story a 4.6/5, cause of the times it made me laughed as I read it. I hope for the author of this story the best of luck in finishing this story, and have a nice day! :D

A journey of quests that collects fellow travelers. A wise guide leads a young man through realms of opportunity and dangers. Bad strangers and possible love interests set the stage.

I came across this novel a week ago and haven't read it until today. My god. I really love this story. It has everything going for it. From the plot to the character development. Plus, the mc's master is by far one of the funniest if not the funniest old man I encountered in a novel so far. Give this wonderful story a shot. You won't be disappointed. I just wish this novel had more chapters, I'm close to the latest chapter 😩

I read this up to chapter 11. This is a cool cultivation novel. The story was written nicely. The flow was good, and as per what I've read, the plot was neither too slow nor too fast. Of course, what I love most about this book is the characters. I'm so glad that the author focused more on the young man and the old man, and the book was not overcrowded with many characters. Their interactions were always fun to see. Though I don't always read this genre, I'm curious to know what will happen to the characters later and how they'll grow in the novel. Keep it up, author!

As a xianxia writer myself, I believe this a gem in the making. The storyline is developing nicely, the world of xianxia is on point, the characters are great and the writing quality is really good. Keep it up and keep tge chapters coming. 😊👍

Hi! I've read your story and really liked it! But it is sad for me not to find any of your social medias to talk with you. As a reader, i hopw i can talk with you about the book. The plots, characters and settings all bring me such a fantastic reading experience. I can understand you are busy with your novel. But i hope we can have a chance to communicate with each other.

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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