Ceo's Fierce Lady Immortal

Shameless review from the Author! Since English is not my first language this novel in not error-free from grammatical errors in which, yours truly is doing an editing one by one per chapter. Thank you for dropping by and happy reading!

I'm not much into cultivation stories but this one had me hooked. The FL isn't the usual ditzy type and she has pretty good character development. I wanna see how the story develops from here. Kudos to the writer!

This is an excellent story, with well-written dialogue, fleshed-out characters, and great comedic timing! Best of all, the MC actually experiences character growth in a natural and interesting way! The only thing dragging the novel down is the typos, but once you’re immersed in the story they’re barely noticeable. So far, it’s a fun, lighthearted, romance-action story, definitely an enjoyable read!

The story is getting better and better. The story line is awesome. The characters building are interesting and fulfilling. The way you develop the characters are interesting and fun.

Wow wow wow wow wow wow, I think it is so goooooooood, it is so mind-blowing, it sucks you in and doesn't let you go... I'm captivated... It's so amazing and all I have to say is wow wow wow wow wow wow wow woww 🥰😇

This is pretty interesting. I really enjoyed reading the first ten chapters. I might come back, delete this review and write another one when I read more. There are some grammatical errors which I know you are aware of. Take care of the punctuation. You constantly switch between the present and the past tense. That made the read a bit complicated. Please stick to one. Choose if you want to tell your story in the present or the past and then accordingly go ahead. I think this story would do great if you take care of these minor issues. Good luck.

Interesting story. I haven't read a novel about female cultivator + CEO. Am looking forward to the romance. I like both mc and ml (which is quite rare... Ml doesn't seem like usual CEO type to me)

So far, the story is coming out nicely, and I'm enjoying it. (I've always been a fan of fantasy + romance genre, so maybe I'm a little biased.) Overall, I admire the personality of the MC, and I'm looking forward to reading more. I have a problem, however. Truthfully, the grammar pulls the story down. (There are some basic grammar problems which can be adjusted with more writing experience — tense consistency, (sometimes you skip between past and present.), also some basic mistakes which can be corrected by Grammarly. But, over time, this aspect will get better as you write more. Furthermore, the updating stability is really good. You can become an excellent writer once your grammar improves!

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Good good good I really dislike the fact these good novel is being disregarded Mostly most translated novel should have lower reviews most plot is being used to repeating is getting annoying However the original have more creative Just that the update speed is not good

The writing quality of the novel is 3 star for it is very easy to understand and stability of updates 3 star for being able to update fast and story development even though it's a cliche' transmigration Female lead it's still a good start and character design is also good the world background is also good for it is easy to understand their world and overall please read this novel for I believe it is a good one so please writer please update more I support you!

Up to chapter 60 the story is a good mix between funny and serious, the pace is good and it's well written (there is still a few mistakes in the edited chapters but it really doesn't hinder the reading so it's fine). The master-disciple relationship is just too cute and the characters are well made. Thanks Author for your work it's really a pleasant novel to read 😂

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Loved this story very details and colourful drawings they were really eye catching. Recomend this book I enjoyed this romance very much . 😁

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............................................... Loving it........................................................ Ty so much author...........

OK................................................................ ............................ Loving it a lot.............. Ty author...............

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This is an excellent story, wich is well-written, great characters, and great comedic timing! Best of all, the MC actually experiences character growth in a natural way! this book had me hooked. great work author

I really love this drama and the different direction the author is pulling its readers into. So adventurous and all. But my question is that, Si Ci Yi is not actually tackling the issue at hand, which is, why she was brought to the new world and that was supposed to be the first thing on anybody’s mind. And the romance is too slow***ww paced. Apart from that,kudos to the drama