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A Sorcerer in Douluo Dalu

作者: Douglas_Six
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A Young Sorcerer in Douluo Dalu I don't own I am the sorcerer King neither Douluo Dalu nor the COVER Google translator I'll let you know here I'm totally new to writing so I probably won't be listening to many comments because I won't be able to meet the demands on writing so it may be that after a while I'll get better at writing but for now it's going to be pretty bad. THIS IS A FULFILLMENT OF A WISH.

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Chapter 1Death

Carlos was a normal 19 year old who lived with his parents had stopped studying after completing high school to work in the family's small cafe although his parents didn't want him to seem he never found something he really wanted to do and decided to continue the small family cafe that even small managed to keep the family well Carlos also enjoyed watching animes, mangas and reading fanfic although he only did that when he was idle, whenever he read fanfic he could only think about what it would be like to live in other worlds but he never understood why anyone that would go to another world could kill people so easily after all if you live in a modern society you wouldn't be getting used to it easily, Carlos always liked fanfics by douluo dalu but never read about the novel, today he was rereading the manga i am sorcerer king at night after reading the last chapter of the manga and going to sleep because it was late and he had to open the cafe early he dreamed of what would happen if the sorcerer went to the douluo continent that was his last thought before sleeping and dying silently.

After a while Carlos regained consciousness slowly and realized he was in a completely empty white space after looking all around and not seeing anything he realized he felt panic or fear or even anxiety everything seemed monotonous until he heard a small sound of beep that got louder and louder until he almost couldn't stand it and then a screen appeared in front of him it was written:

Hi I'm the system that God created to deal with souls if you're wondering why it's calm and why this place and where your fate will be decided so we can't have people freaking out here can we? Well, as a system of God, I have some functions that are Paradise, Hell and Reincarnation, see each being that God created that has a soul and also intelligent has a karma value that starts at 0 and can vary from positive or negative depending on how you lived and when bigger means you did many wrong or good things if you did wrong things but no more than a certain amount you will be sent to hell and after paying for it you will be sent to heaven of course if you were a person with bad to a certain point in your life but then changed and started to help other people willingly your bad karma will be canceled gradually and change to good after a clear time you will only know this here because if you do good deeds hoping to change your karma no it would make clear sense the greater your karma the better your paradise will be and it also opens up the possibility of reincarnation in other worlds that God created based on the imagination of your creations in these worlds you do not r You will receive bad or positive karma but that will not be said either but if you do something extremely bad you will go to hell to pay for it after all the people of that world were also created by God.

Now let's start judging where you are going now let's see...After some time with nothing appearing on the screen, the system then went back to writing, you have a karma of 0 even children have at least 10 karma positive and even adults who have almost no negative karma would have -10 after thousands of years you and one of the few that have happened this now makes your situation different as we can't judge then you will reincarnate but unlike someone with high karma you you won't be able to decide many things and you can also gain karma on the other be negative or positive to be judged next time and of course you won't remember the conversations so you don't have problems gaining karma instead in these cases you will be reincarnated as one of those fanfics that you like so much instead of min thought you met one of those ROB that appear in fanfics now let's start the reincarnation process.

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