A Second Chance of Having Youth

Tbh the story is alright and interesting however many mistakes were made when it comes to the grammatical aspects. Sometimes sentences either aren’t finished or there is the wrong usage of certain words or just misspellings. If you’re willing to look over this issue you may like this book. I recommend reading the first chapters and then deciding.

The Story has a very unique structure. more ever it's feels realistic, the beginning gave the vibe of life realistic experience. The Author did great, giving the back a natural flow understanding to the reader. I can't wait to read more chapters

I love how it’s written in the style of a light novel. You don’t see this very much and on webnovel but I’m all for it! Keep up the good work[img=update]

The story is very interesting. Early on everything is black-and-white clear-cut but as the story progresses things get Blurred and it’s cool too see how the MC Interacts with the Characters

Reading a couple of chapters, The story itself is fine, the frequent update is great, and the characters themselves are decent only major concerns about this book is the grammar and spelling errors as long as you fix them it’s fine.

The spelling errors are quite bothering to fully get into the story (in the early chapters) as a reader for me. But the plot is kinda interesting. And morover it's also rooted with realism and has a very grounded approach. When characters are having a conversation, it really feels like two people are actually talking. My only gripe is the slow pace and very long stretched out chapters. I am a difficult reader, so it may be just for me🤷‍♂️ but since the novel had already crossed a considerable amount of chapters, I believe has rectified all the issues I mentioned. Good luck with your Edward's self-journey

The plot is lit! It was an interesting start! The grammar was on point with slight edits that had to be made for perfection! Well, the pacing of the story is fine too, good job! I like the story and hope it gets more support. Good luck with your writing journey, [img=recommend] I can't wait for you to become mature and a veteran author someday [img=faceslap] Keep growing and master your writing style hehe 👍

I really do love this amazing book, it's really perfect and really interesting to read ☺️☺️, Like seriously, I really love the book so very much 😅😅.. keep it up author 😘

I've only started reading this but I quickly realize this is something I'll keep reading the future. The pacing is actually alright. It won't overwhelm the readers but it also won't bore them. But I have to admit, the first few chapters I read kind of bug me. There's a few mistakes such as not putting quotation marks on a speech and lower case letters at the start of a sentence.

The book is great, love our mc, thkught the first few chapers were quite interesting and decided to continue, and i saw it got better, good job author.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

well..this is a really interesting book. the main mc is different which is nice. the flow is good . minor adjustment with commas and it will be good.

A suggestion, I think if the title is shortened to 'The Second Chance of Youth' it would sound more catchy. Until where I paused, the story hasn't given us any helpful clue but, I noticed the 'vampire' tag. Did it mean the MC was a vampire? That's why he looked youthful after almost a century? Writing and grammar-wise, the author could do better with more practice. If you didn't do it, I recommend to have up to 10 chapters in drafts before publishing 1 chapter. It will help to reconstruct and solidify your storyline and ideas

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Nice story l must say..... I also liked the author's writting skill more.... Its an interesting one and also a very good plot.... Keep going author...l am seeing a great future ahead of urs....

Interesting book. The Author did a great work developing the plot and characters. I look forward to the future of the book Recommended[img=recommend]

Author has a good grasp of storytelling and it was enjoyable to read through. There were hardly any grammatical errors, and if there were, they did not deter readers from the experience. This is an interesting story with a breath of fresh air. I also immensely enjoyed the author's way of captivating the readers with rich imagery and painting the world in our minds. But most of all. The banter. Oh my god, the banter is probably my favourite part. Some writers can write natural dialogue and some struggle with it - but this author is great at writing dialogue.

It's a bit challenging to my worldviews, since the author refuses to give us a magical reasoning, but. If you look past that, the novel's pretty cool. There's a few mistakes here and there, but it's not like the author's bad at english, they're just casual mistakes. Anyhow, looking forward to the new chaps.

The story has very interesting beginning. It keeps the reader always curious what is going to happen next. It gives a realistic vibes too. I recommend it to every one.

The writing style could use some work, but other then that this story is great! I can honestly say I kept getting suprised by the author as to what was going to happen next to the MC, which is something rare to find on here. The story itself is very interesting, and stands out. I can't wait to read on and see what happens and just exactly what occurred in MCs past. Kudos to Author!

loved it. The imagery, the character development, the world building and most importantly capitative storyline is amazing. this one hooked me up. Keep updating bruh...