Greeting the fourth brother

Close enough, I spoke up in greeting, giving an elegant curtsy. Head down slightly bent chin tucked I bent both knees slightly. 

"Greetings to the second family's firstborn son Bo Hui and second family second born Don Uk." 

Bo smiled, replying followed by his brother Don Uk who's face barely changed.

"Greetings to sister Guai," 

"Greetings to little sister Guai," 

Don Uk is a natural cold male; almost the exact replica of the first family's first-born son. At sixteen he had a childish look still but in two years it will drastically change.

"I have heard the second family's second-born son has returned. We have not officially met, so today I have come bearing gifts as a younger sister greeting her fourth brother," 

My head tilted on a side I spoke once again, dropping my voice an octave to give it a sweeter sound.

To my ears I felt annoyed, could I not be more vomit worthy sounding?