Is this okay?

K Bar - Tokyo -

Terashima Yuhi was not the easily jealous type, at least that was what he thought. But when he saw Sumire with Nakara, then Sumire with her ex. Yuhi realized how petty he was. The feelings of jealousy exist in him too. His gaz fell on the girl fast asleep in his arms. The moment they arrived at the bar, Sumire fell asleep.

It wasnt Friday, but he noticed she was sleepy and so he decided to come here instead. Yuhi examined her face for a few minutes and frowned. She looks exhausted. Sumire pretends that it does not bother her, but he saw the expression on her face when they had to meet that guy again today.

'Should I stop bringing her with me?

But if I do that, she would be left here by herself.:

Yuhi carefully tucked a loose strand of hair away and noticed her stir. Soon she opened her eyes. Sumire looked at him half dazed and half wondering before she closed her eyes again.

He blinked and chuckled. "Hey wait a sec."

"Yuhi, I'm tired. I want to keep sleeping."