Unwavering Hope

So far so great i am amazingly loving it 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

I was a bit torn with this story. I thought the overall concept was pretty good but the drama was a little too much over the top for my taste considering the “best” friend relationships. I didn’t think there was much character development from when the characters were teenagers to *****hood. It seemed that the characters were recycling the same behavior without learning anything but that’s just me. Don’t get mad author. The overall concept was good but I think they’re are missing pieces that could help make this story great. Don’t stop writing because of this review and thank you for sharing your story. It takes a lot of courage to post your work publicly. Keep in mind that even accomplished writers aren’t perfect either. Best wishes.