The remaining points are not yet known, but I think they will get a solid 4.
The idea, I liked it. My favorite characters in this franchise are Hagrid, Draco, Neville, Luna, Sirius, Regulus Black and the Tonks Family (the Weasley Twins, but when, if they are represented as hooligans, or jokers). The very fact that someone decided to link such ambiguous characters is not just the blood of the twentieth generation, but a brother and sister. Boom! 5 stars.
The plot goes a little fast, but with the condition that it is an introduction to the story and it is very difficult to interest someone in reading, often such introductory first chapters. So that's excusable.
Mad Bella loves her sister very much, which was told in the books. It's perfectly played here too. And Severus, he essentially considers Draco not to be his godfather, but in fact his son, so these emotions are understandable and approved. The only problem is the heroine herself, but she was not revealed from the word at all, so I will not swear. Nevertheless, I liked it, I'm waiting for further continuation.
Гугл переводчик.
