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Mark_Nile
Mark_NileLv142mth
2024-08-27 17:00

Let OPness shower this book in its glorious splendour and majesty. May we witness another rising of an Emperor. Let us go through this journey to the Omniverse and beyond. Let's goooooooo!!!!!

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John_Smith_3884
John_Smith_3884Lv13

The author does have a very good track record for OP aspects. I just found out that he has a new book and I am looking forward to reading this one.

Mark_Nile
Mark_NileLv14

Indeed, he does. I'm waiting for the chapters to accumulate to epic proportions, and then I'll get on with it.

John_Smith_3884:The author does have a very good track record for OP aspects. I just found out that he has a new book and I am looking forward to reading this one.
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PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchLv13

As an Author and also a Reader of Adui's works, I'll leave my honest review here about what I think of the story so far. To be honest, it feels kind of dull and soulless, like the characters are puppets in a puppet show, the setting also feels kind of dry, and you've failed at making an atmosphere that is believable. Adui I think you should stop thinking about your infinite mana story while writing new stories, you have to start from zero and build something from zero, this clearly feels like it's very inspired by that world, or perhaps it even takes place in it. Even the dialogue of the main character is strange, why does he talks like that? Its as if he knows he's the main character of a novel, which only makes the entire setting more ironic and strange. The ideas are good I think, but the execution is rather poor for the first chapter. Like this you won't be able to attract that many new readers, and only those from Infinite Mana will show up. I think this story has some potential but it needs more "life" and "soul" to it, do you get it? The beginning of Infinite Mana had all of that, the main character was grounded, an underdog, and it felt like that because his thoughts were relatable and those of a normal person until he started getting more powerful. I think you need to start from there and then go up, develop the characters personalities, emotions, dreams, hopes, and what they want to achieve. This story, quite honestly, feels more like a concept where a story was written around it, rather than a proper story that showcases a concept.

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