based on my past experience of reading naruto fanfiction, this is one of the better ones that I've read. this is also more darker than other fanfiction, though not unnecessarily so. The mc is definitely one of the better highlights of this. His conviction is quite strong and he is focused on his goal, and based on the current chapter I can see that there will be development. Overall a good piece of work that explores the deeper themes of the naruto world. the punctuation and grammar is also easily understood would definitely recommend ps. sorry if I ranted, this is my first ever review.
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