Shameless author review! Since this is the first novel, I'll take any and all constructive criticism and try to edit things accordingly ;)

I realy like this story, im glad it was updated after this long hiatus, my favorite thing is of course MC,Marcus who is not idiot, and knows to survive in One Pice World one needs to be strong and skilled, just like Law said, weak can have choice how they Die, Marcus wants to have choice, so he becomes stronger before he even starts his own Journey in One Piece World, i Hope he will not be a to much of boy scout, and will act more like pirate but with some morals and rules, im fine if he helps canon cast,but not just helping every random person he meets during his travels, i Hope he will create his own Crew, not just joining Luffy Crew. Ps: I vote for Nami to be his first girlfriend, Luffy with his Sun God luck will for sure meet someone else as his navigator.