Review Detail of Rayyer in The Bloodborne Heir

the biggest problem in this book is development I'm 13 chapters in and feel like every chapters is missing chapters worth of context, info and development certain point in this chp that should of Been the main or one of the main climax of that chapter is just glossed over this doesn't happen once is every chapeter chp13 should of been 40-60 chapters long but is forced in and removing so much just to make it 13 its rushed