Review Detail of MrBlackWing in TEEN WOLF - Born Alpha

When I started reading, I expected the worst from the comments. But it was worse than I expected. Terrible text organization quality, definitely without any proofreading and the story sometimes doesn't seem to make any sense, as if he just wrote words that connects and that's it. Dude, seriously, pause the writing for a while and do a nice edit. The way it is, I'm impressed that you are in the top 10.