the usual writing errors right from the start.. it's an abrupt introduction with a confusing backstory..one paragraph said kieran is her first past rejected mate and another paragraph said he's currently rejecting her at the altar? 🤔
IceQueen21
Liked it!
giốngIceQueen21:You should take your time to read it again and point out the errors. Read again and you will see that Keiran is not her first mate. Thanks for the review 👍
jyuni_hass:yeah, my bad I got confused because both pack names are quite similar - silver moon & blood moon 😅