I respect your input, I'll try harder on the story

He was the same in his original life, when he was a child in his new life and when he grew up: No plans, no concept of consequences, no moral compass and beyond all stupid. Risking his life, killing innocents and just causing a lot of pain despite having a reality changing system. Do yourself a favor, read novels about MCs you can at least find some aspect to look up to.

Yeah, sorry you don't like Ricky. I get how it's frustrating to read about someone like him since he literally embodies all those traits, but that's how I wrote him. Change is hard, and not everyone just plans to be perfect and seeks to become god, some people don't care for stuff like that. He's immature and doesn't grasp the concept of consequences yet, especially since I haven't fully developed his character. His only moral compass is whatever he thinks is right which I tried to show in the first chapter along with the description that says 'A filthy, idiotic, hypocritical alcoholic degenerate, known to most as Ricky' so I don't know what else you were expecting when reading this fic. Also, not everyone just wakes up in a new life and immediately decides to trust the transparent blue screen in front of them. Your opinion is valid, but it feels a bit insulting and ignorant when you criticize my work, considering I'm a new writer exploring character development and growth. Anyway, sorry if Ricky isn't the character you wanted. My bad.

Just because you are a new writer we can't criticize you? You don't have to be RR Martin to know that writing an MC with a childish and frankly stupid personality is annoying to read. Especially because it is the only character trait there is in books nowadays, it's so unoriginal it's almost funny.

Also, as a writer, it's important to take criticism on the chin and learn from it and I shouldn't complain but understand's others opinions. My bad.

It's alright, author. You are a great writer. I see the character, and I don't just see his flaws but also the scope for character development. If you capitalize on this, I am sure you will see even more readers. I also think character development should be gradual, so don't rush it. Keep it natural but not slow. It's all about finding that perfect sweet spot.

Don't worry I can see your replies through your profile. And it's all good! I just thought the way you worded that sounded like you were way too entitled. But I can see how you could have worded that wrong.

Yeah, this has made me realize that I need to be more mindful and considerate with my replies to avoid coming across as an ignorant jerk.

mostly you can make him immature and evil as u want to portray him but what make it boring and wasteful to read is when your character concetrate overly on smut...like c'mon if it is our world and you decided his personality to be a degenerate who thinks only with lower head it's kinda normal...but in marvel where possibilities are nearly endless. it's best to focus on other thing rather than just chasing pu**y and impergnating women as the end goal. just like development of tony stark in the original world. give your mc something valuable to protect, look up to or look after. something that makes him grow up other than the smut there.

well of course, but you don't really realize the things you love most until you're apart or lose them and he doesn't just stay like this way in my notes, his character devolpment arc is happening soon and does turn towards this direction but stuff like that, in my opinion, only happens to people like Ricky when you're forced to apperciate how much that means to you and I'm trying to build that before swinging and sledghammer down onto Ricky and forcing everyhting full circle

Hi, Author can you just confirm that there is no ntr and yuri? I hate that sh** Thanks

Honestly this sounds like a story that o would read if the MC had some character growth. One dimensional characters are somewhat frustrating to read... not as bad as painfully dense characters (those usually make me drop real quick) but I've read quite a few where the growth occurs fairly quickly (less than 10 to 15 chapters of "why am I still reading this") and I can enjoy those

the friend was also a girl so yea no ntr lol 😭