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It's aight. Personally the story is going too fast. In three chapters he has escaped a gang, gotten adopted and met the entire family. Also the writing is mid. Writing in first Person works sometimes but this just isn't it. it's written in a weird mix of past tense and present tense. The plot is intreasting. I don't know how or why MC knows about Modren Family. It's probably because I skimmed it. Keep working author but try to make the ploy a little slower. You could have made him escaping the gang into multiple chapter. Yet you finished it in a couple hundred words. Besy of luck author and keep writing to improve :)
Modern Family: Genius
burakku
Được 9 người thích
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burakku:Thanks for the review. I will try to better the grammar. I originally wanted to make the escape two parts, but instead made one with 1800 words. The plot will slow down now. I made a big time-skip as I had no idea what to write about. Thanks for the advice.
Np, your idea is good, you just need to execute it better. also one tip i can give is that once you have finished writing the chapter. copy or cut like 300-400 words of the story and ask GPT to fix grammar and spelling mistakes. this way you can fix any grammatical or spelling mistakes of your entire chapter.
burakku:Thanks for the review. I will try to better the grammar. I originally wanted to make the escape two parts, but instead made one with 1800 words. The plot will slow down now. I made a big time-skip as I had no idea what to write about. Thanks for the advice.
burakku:Thanks for the review. I will try to better the grammar. I originally wanted to make the escape two parts, but instead made one with 1800 words. The plot will slow down now. I made a big time-skip as I had no idea what to write about. Thanks for the advice.
I have a question for anyone who wants to answer, what is attractive about Modern Family to make a fanfic? I mean, I read several MF fanfics but I don't find the fun in reading them, it's a normal world with a normal and even average plot in several cases, I would appreciate it if someone could explain to me why there are so many MF fanfics.