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This is such a disappointment, for real. I've been looking for good Baki fanfic, and then I saw this. I was hoping that this fanfic would be great, but it turned out to be the biggest disappointment on the app.
Baki: Martial System
The_HonorableGhost
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Yeh family is always annoying. I mean just leave them and try to become OP and rich instead of being a beaten dog who listens to every little thing the family says.
Shishume:First, his childlike personality. Second, the OC's. Third, he's in the Baki universe, so why does romance have more scenes than fighting? Lastly, his annoying family.
First, his childlike personality. Second, the OC's. Third, he's in the Baki universe, so why does romance have more scenes than fighting? Lastly, his annoying family.
The_HonorableGhost:Mind giving me some things you didn't like about it? I could always use some constructive criticism!
All valid points to be fair, but let me atleast defend myself one by one...first he's acting like a child because he is one he's like 14 at the start and was chained to a hospital bed since birth, second I don't like the oc's either but I kept asking for recommendations for other ones I could pick, and there were just none that fit, and 3rd, the reason there's more love scenes than fighting right now is because I need to build for something big down the line. Meaningless fights eventually become boring and stale, thus I'm building rhe stuff now for the reward of the action later down the line, it's just taking a while to get there. Trust me I hate the OC's too, but I simply recieved no recommendations at that time of which person to pick as the love interest, which is needed for this novel as it's essential for the story later..., also the actions here like in 2 more chapters after current, then it's only action for like the rest of the novel
Shishume:First, his childlike personality. Second, the OC's. Third, he's in the Baki universe, so why does romance have more scenes than fighting? Lastly, his annoying family.
Yeah, right. He isn't a child, he just transmigrated into the kid's body. And what do you mean by 'meaningless fights would be boring'? As long as the fight is thrilling, it becomes more exciting to read a story like this.
The_HonorableGhost:All valid points to be fair, but let me atleast defend myself one by one...first he's acting like a child because he is one he's like 14 at the start and was chained to a hospital bed since birth, second I don't like the oc's either but I kept asking for recommendations for other ones I could pick, and there were just none that fit, and 3rd, the reason there's more love scenes than fighting right now is because I need to build for something big down the line. Meaningless fights eventually become boring and stale, thus I'm building rhe stuff now for the reward of the action later down the line, it's just taking a while to get there. Trust me I hate the OC's too, but I simply recieved no recommendations at that time of which person to pick as the love interest, which is needed for this novel as it's essential for the story later..., also the actions here like in 2 more chapters after current, then it's only action for like the rest of the novel
You're right, I would probably have fun reading stuff like that too, I'll make sure to include more fights going forward, dw. Also, no, he was a child of the same age when he died, I'm not sure if I made that too clear in one of my chapters or not, I'll take a look..., anyway thanks for the feedback man I really do appreciate it a lot, you see, there's gonna be like a semi 'squel'/part to the novel, consider it like a 2nd volumet of I have enoght time to finish writing it that will have a lot of those types of fights with creatures you would've never expected...(all I can spoil for now) and your insistence that readers would still be interesting in stuff like that is amazing thx ❤️
Shishume:Yeah, right. He isn't a child, he just transmigrated into the kid's body. And what do you mean by 'meaningless fights would be boring'? As long as the fight is thrilling, it becomes more exciting to read a story like this.
Shishume:To be honest, if he wants to reach the pinnacle of strength, he needs to remove the hindrances to his training. Love and romance are things he doesn't need, love will just hold him back.
