Review Detail of Golden_Essence in The Apollo Twins

Hey guys, shameless author here. I know this book is just at it's early stage, but I... I would appreciate every feedback however it comes. that's how I know I'm doing the right thing. My books is pretty much out of place on a platform like this one. I know that well enough. But I'm trying my best, to make sure it's enjoyable. It's not the usual fantasy stuff, still, I'm trying... Really I am. Sleepless nights, everything I'm sacrificing to make sure this book is something. But I can't do that without you. I need your feedbacks. I need to know I'm doing it right. Please. I may and may not have cried writing this review.