Review Detail of BonVoyage in I am Rimuru Tempest (Rewrite Version)
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Hello everyone! Author here with my legally mandated review. This is a rewrite of my original story. But I do have a lot of changes planned as I go. You could say that this is more like a fanfic of my fanfic lol. Anyways, I hope all of you enjoy.
I am Rimuru Tempest (Rewrite Version)
BonVoyage
Được 10 người thích
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Yeah, I know my story won't be for everyone. But it's what I wanted to write, so I am. Also, the og rimuru route is mainly with building Tempest and the earlier parts. I am hoping to change the story so that it is my own version of the story kind of how I am changing the persona 5 story in my other fic. Either way, thanks for giving it a try.
LunaKindred:I actually prefer you make something like someone reincarnated as Gilgamesh or just making OC. I mean what's the point if you used rimuru template but still going with OG rimuru route? Isn't just better to read the original novel? But well, let's see what you're cooking
Hey there! Welcome back, too! I remember you from the original story. it's hard to list out all the changes, but for writing, it is: Better writing, better pacing, better romances, better lemons, better structure. As for the story, I don't have a full list of changes yet, but if you read the first 4 chapters, you can see how relatively different it is. I am keeping some things from the original that I liked, but now that I have more experience writing rather than just rewriting the show as it was I plan to make more changes than before.
Pepega123:Welcome back! What will be the main differences?
BonVoyage:Hey there! Welcome back, too! I remember you from the original story. it's hard to list out all the changes, but for writing, it is: Better writing, better pacing, better romances, better lemons, better structure. As for the story, I don't have a full list of changes yet, but if you read the first 4 chapters, you can see how relatively different it is. I am keeping some things from the original that I liked, but now that I have more experience writing rather than just rewriting the show as it was I plan to make more changes than before.
BonVoyage:Hey there! Welcome back, too! I remember you from the original story. it's hard to list out all the changes, but for writing, it is: Better writing, better pacing, better romances, better lemons, better structure. As for the story, I don't have a full list of changes yet, but if you read the first 4 chapters, you can see how relatively different it is. I am keeping some things from the original that I liked, but now that I have more experience writing rather than just rewriting the show as it was I plan to make more changes than before.
Right now, I have around 10 total planned. Though it might change as the story goes. I do have plans to make the people in it actually relevant and not just be added and then forgotten. You can kind of see what it is with how I'm implementing Shuna. If you read the original, a couple members got purged(like Lina and Trya). So I am changing things up for this one.
Romance_guy:How large will the harem be ?
BonVoyage:Right now, I have around 10 total planned. Though it might change as the story goes. I do have plans to make the people in it actually relevant and not just be added and then forgotten. You can kind of see what it is with how I'm implementing Shuna. If you read the original, a couple members got purged(like Lina and Trya). So I am changing things up for this one.
BonVoyage:Right now, I have around 10 total planned. Though it might change as the story goes. I do have plans to make the people in it actually relevant and not just be added and then forgotten. You can kind of see what it is with how I'm implementing Shuna. If you read the original, a couple members got purged(like Lina and Trya). So I am changing things up for this one.
The synopsis implies this is a harem-seeking protagonist and (at least in my experience) they usually don't actually romantically love said love interests. Is that the case in this fic, him being with them because they are beautiful and he wants a harem or are there romantic feelings from both MC and love interests?
BonVoyage:Hey there! Welcome back, too! I remember you from the original story. it's hard to list out all the changes, but for writing, it is: Better writing, better pacing, better romances, better lemons, better structure. As for the story, I don't have a full list of changes yet, but if you read the first 4 chapters, you can see how relatively different it is. I am keeping some things from the original that I liked, but now that I have more experience writing rather than just rewriting the show as it was I plan to make more changes than before.
There will be romantic feelings. The first romance with Shuna happens pretty quickly. but I develop their relationship, and it becomes pretty clear that they both love each other. With Shion, I built it up too showing them getting closer to each other. The plan is to make them genuinely love and care about each other rather than just collect them and forget about them.
RatedOverr:The synopsis implies this is a harem-seeking protagonist and (at least in my experience) they usually don't actually romantically love said love interests. Is that the case in this fic, him being with them because they are beautiful and he wants a harem or are there romantic feelings from both MC and love interests?