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I am really enjoying the story so far. I would like to say when you introduced Lyra in her beast form that you should change it back to a lion head because seeing a human head just doesn't sit right with the proportions of her body. I don't know how much you will update this regularly but I would be fine with even 5 a week so you can have a little rest and have more time to write and gather your thoughts. keep up the good work.

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This is my first crack at writing, so thanks for the kudos! And if you spot anything that needs fixing, give me a shout.