Review Detail of sazawa01 in Eternal Me

The writing is very good. No grammatical errors. But I do think it could use some paragraph maintenance cause it might get hard to read sometimes. The characters are also quite remember able. When ever I read wn's with Chinese names I legitimately forget 99% of the names. But you can expect the characters in this to be engrained into your memory. Its quite refreshing to see this kind of unique story. I am yet to read all of the chapters, but hopefully the author continues uploading.