Review Detail of Shub_Niggurath in Reborn in the Mist

A story with good potential although the beginning is very rough on the edges, the MC can be some what annoying with his over eagerness and stupid decisions, but I guess that's normal? Other than that, the grammar is pretty good although some plot points seem just weird, like Kaguya attack, we don't get the consequences of that one on said clan, but whatever. The chapters are also too short for my liking and for the average in Webnovel in general, I would day it would've been better to fuse every 2 chapters, but that's just personal opinion. Overall good story with potential if you can just get over the beginning.