The story is nice and the cultivation and system seem pretty top notch . But I feel like everything is rushed , from what happens to the end of a chapter. But I like it .
Thanks a lot for sharing your review. 😃
Actually in the first 12 chapters I tried to share the details of the world and set the background for the story. The story starts from chapter 13.
Do read and share what you think of it .
I will try and change my first few chapters meanwhile !