Review Detail of Bruh_mann in My sister Arisu Sakayanagi is a yandere

To be honest, this novel is pretty good if you look at it superficially. But I think the author leaned in too much on the "Edgy MC" some of the chapters will just be him monologueing about how terrible he is and I think the author should've used the "show don't tell" approach. I personally don't mind the incest stuff but when it's supposed to be the main focus at least make a story about how it even happened it's just "oh were having sex now" ok the very first chapter. Still pretty good, would love to see how the story progresses