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ShadowDialga
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Excellent Naruto fanfiction so far ! (chapter 54) The story is really slow but it's to be expected of a story about someone not extremely talented but with an infinite amount of time in his hands to compensate quality (talent) with quantity (efforts and accumulation). There are some grammatical mistakes here and there, but nothing too dramatic, it's perfectly readable and even better than just readable. The story has a lot of details and a bit of character growth with time so far. The author seems to have though a lot about his story seeing the concept he brings up and how they are explained, and how the MC is not too OP despite having the cheat he has. Long story short, someone who knows the plot of Naruto reincarnates as a random character in this world, he can choose the cheat/talents/clan he has within moderation and chose the time control ability. The ability grows with him and only allows for time travel in the beginning, to give him a lot of time to train despite his normal talents. I highly recommend reading it, good job author !

Naruto: Time Traveler

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SolemnFox
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How far along is the story by chapter 54? I've seen some with 200+ chapters but still in the academy. Hoping that's not the case here.

Sycore_w
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Thanks a lot! I will do my best to not let you down, reading such a review inspire me to put more time and efforts in to this story, thanks!

ShadowDialga
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As of chapter 54, we are at the chunnin exam, and the MC is strong enough to beat a jonin but can't really show it. The academy arc is a bit long in case it worries you it ends around chapter 30 but it's because the MC uses it as a opportunity to try things and train a lot, since they don't have missions or things like that that could hinder his training.

SolemnFox:How far along is the story by chapter 54? I've seen some with 200+ chapters but still in the academy. Hoping that's not the case here.
SolemnFox
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Thank you.

ShadowDialga:As of chapter 54, we are at the chunnin exam, and the MC is strong enough to beat a jonin but can't really show it. The academy arc is a bit long in case it worries you it ends around chapter 30 but it's because the MC uses it as a opportunity to try things and train a lot, since they don't have missions or things like that that could hinder his training.