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This is great, the mc is rational and smart so far and the author writes well and has really managed to capture the vibe of night city. My only issue is the pacing, the chapters are slow because the mc isn't doing much, he's either planning in his head or getting info dumps, I'd recommend the author make the mc more active, have him actually get stuff done so the story fells like less of a chore to read.

Cyberpunk 2077: A flawed Timeline

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