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I like the magic concept in a developed world and also the military setting. The names are really unique. Writing is good except the fact that those attack techniques weren't explained how they work. I like the Vahalla character the most. How he is inside Shailya and guiding him, gives me Shinigami vibes. Overall, its good and has the potential. I'd love to read along.

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Thanks for the feedback, man. I will take it into consideration to keep improving my story. Peace.