A nicely written piece of work. I liked Rebecca's emotions, as you could feel what she has been through. However, the sentence structure needs to be worked upon. Too long paragraphs break the immersion. Plot sounds interesting too. My personal wish is for Rebecca to end the world and destroy everything. Yes. Thats'swhat I want.
_Elle
Liked it!
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