Review Detail of Zetsway in I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God
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I keep seeing this author, and unknowingly, I've read 3 or 4 of his fics(or, I've started to read). One thing all of them have in common is that they are quite interesting in the first 20 or so chapters. The Mc does show signs of being a sick degenerate, but he's controlled and it doesn't fell bad to read. After chapter 20 or so, it's like all brakes are off. Also, another thing that quite annoys me in fanfiction is that the authors don't fact-check their knowledge. If it was some obscure fandom like an old game or something it could be understood, but for DxD, every single fact is barely a google search away.
I am secretly a 12th Dimensional Eldritch God
Daoist_KittyKat
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Daoist_KittyKat:i guess. but whatever man. if you like it then continue reading. if you dislike it there's no one stopping you from dropping the fic. I had enough of this kind of talk that only agitate my mind and heart which make me unavailable to focus on writing. if you wanna be critical it's up to you as I never claim I am a good author to begin with and I am not a perfect person to be perfect at every single detail. my bio should had stated it, im a trash author writing trash fic
well, as i say. i change the details to fit my writing/narratives. i mean that's the point of fanfic. I'm not gonna follow everything down to the last details. that's stressful. all i want to do with this fic is close my head and write whatever came to my mind
Zetsway:off the top of my head, Raiser isn't the heir to the Phenex family. This one is minor tho.
Every author said that same thing when pointed out a mistake...I get that it's a fanfic in which you have complete narrative control, but there are still logical consequences to some things. Let's use this example, you set Raiser as the heir of the Phenex family. If so, cool, but now you must do something about his brothers. Easiest would be to kill them. My gripe on this type of modification to cannon is that it isn't taken to it's logical conclusion. You stated that his brothers are 'busy' with the family business...Isn't that what the family leader/heir is supposed to do?
Daoist_KittyKat:well, as i say. i change the details to fit my writing/narratives. i mean that's the point of fanfic. I'm not gonna follow everything down to the last details. that's stressful. all i want to do with this fic is close my head and write whatever came to my mind
i guess. but whatever man. if you like it then continue reading. if you dislike it there's no one stopping you from dropping the fic. I had enough of this kind of talk that only agitate my mind and heart which make me unavailable to focus on writing. if you wanna be critical it's up to you as I never claim I am a good author to begin with and I am not a perfect person to be perfect at every single detail. my bio should had stated it, im a trash author writing trash fic
Zetsway:Every author said that same thing when pointed out a mistake...I get that it's a fanfic in which you have complete narrative control, but there are still logical consequences to some things. Let's use this example, you set Raiser as the heir of the Phenex family. If so, cool, but now you must do something about his brothers. Easiest would be to kill them. My gripe on this type of modification to cannon is that it isn't taken to it's logical conclusion. You stated that his brothers are 'busy' with the family business...Isn't that what the family leader/heir is supposed to do?
