Review Detail of Ronald_Shamo in Divine Luck

Ok I like the story a lot. I’ll try not to spoil it but at the same time say something useful. First of all thee story type is overpowered mc but with a focus on cuteness. So even though it leans towards adventure it more directly fills a slice of life storyline. To answer the previous poster who said there’s no story development, I will say that the story seems very focused on the mc and his pet ( or is it the fox and her pet human?) there was some side chars that got some development but then disappeared . However it’s still a new story and I haven’t passed 30 chapters yet so maybe they will be back. To the author, part of world building includes side chars and they should interact to expand the story world. I will have to see if some of these side chars start interacting more with the story and sticking around. And the area with the side chars needs a bit of building. The mc will be visiting town a lot, if you are really doing slice of life we need to see that life, if you are doing adventure then a bit more excitement in the adventure side ( means the mc has to be challenged even though he’s op.). So my rating, good so far, needs a bit more worldbuilding ( expand the scope) without losing the cuteness that I like.