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To begin, I believe you already have a foundation to build upon; what captivates me about the story is how it immerses you, making you feel like you're part of the narrative and visualising the whole narrative. However, there's a need for further development in the world background; otherwise,

FIRST LOVER OF MY LAST LIFE.....

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thanks broo thanks for reading my story