Review Detail of im_kalikk in Ezuno: Codex Of The Phantom Prince

Hello! I'm Kalikk and the proud author of this story, This story has been in my mind for almost three years now and I just never got down to writing it but now I am. I won't give the story a 5 star because I genuinely don't think my writing is perfect, but I can promise a damn good story. I love criticism and I always want to be better so I can make a great story for my readers, so I hope you guys can give me some areas to improve, So yeah. Please ask any questions you may have for the story here, and I'll try to get to them.