English is very choppy and needs either an auto correcter or someone to beta the chapter. Updates are fine.
Shenlong_2005
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giốngwhat does choppy mean ? and actually I AM using an auto corrector because english is not my motherly language. So if there's grammatical error then they come either from the auto corrector itself or because i write too fast and maybe push some buttons without noticing. Also the next chapter is going to be either tomorrow or after tomorrow because i just got my new pc and i need to build it before being able to write the next chapter.