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Interesting story, you forgot to explain how his hands returned after they got cut off, and a couple more plot holes here and there, but it feels great to read, has a nice and steady pace to it, but remember, Don’t Sink into Cliches unless you have too! Good luck, take your time and can’t wait to read more!

Lackey's Seducing Survival Odyssey

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Oh! Thank you!! It's not like I didn't explain about the torn hands because Aether believed it was magic