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Truly horrible. Maybe expectations were too high for what I should have expected, but this is written terribly. In an awkward and uncharacteristic exchange with TOAA, MC suddenly becomes the second strongest being in the entire multiverse with all of his wishes granted for literally no reason. Then, he travels from world to world solving minor problems for humans such as genociding the Skrulls, beating up the Asgardians for some reason, making fun of Reed Richards as well. Nothing really makes sense and the MC has the mentality of a 13 year old. Half the novel is just him praising himself and laughing. The other half is him traveling the (universe, multiverse? It’s written so poorly I can’t tell) and “saving the day” or some other BS. Idk, I guess I am just disappointed with the MC’s personality. I anticipated Giratina in Marvel and received a 13 year old with 13 year old humor on a power trip through the cosmos while cosplaying Giratina for fun. But he isn’t even doing a good cosplay because he still acts like a normal 13 year old.
Giratina in Marvel MCU AU
Spectre_Ouroboros
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*Exasperated sigh* 1 out of 10 review, a lot whining with no real feedback, or suggestions for improvement. Seriously how hard, can it be to write a real review? Step 1: Recognize something the author did right. Step 2: Point out as many things the author did not do correctly or could improve as you can. Step 3: Provide at least two ways to fix each thing done wrong so the author can actually improve instead of just feeling disappointed with people's reading comprehension. Step 4: Conclusion, if you cannot follow steps 1 through 3 in their entirety, then do not post a review in the first place, all you are doing is wasting everyone's time, and spreading negativity with no room for improvement.
Now that how to write a real, quote on quote, negative review is out of the way let's get back to how you clearly do not seem to understand what you are reading: SPOILERS: #1 TOAA NEEDED a replacement Oblivion, the MC was the best fit, with the alterations the void made to his soul. #2 The only minor problem(which is actually not minor), that the mc solves are in another universe. Within his universe, everything he does has significance, especially since he is literally given responsibility over the balance of his universe, Skrull genocide, is a mayor thing. The only asgardian he beats up, and for very good reason if you know anything about young Odin, is Odin, (Writing this I realized I could have done a much better job in introducing him, his backstory, and what he has done, to garner the MC's initial disdain, see that is how you are supposed to feedback on a negative review). Aside from Odin, no Asgardian is harmed by the MC, in any case he is helping them. Making fun of Reed, are you a fan of his, because otherwise, you would know that is the least he deserves. Again another one that could have been better introduced and explained, though I do so in the comments. #3 The mentality of a 13 year old..., seriously. So you are telling me, that between being an overbearing dictator, and having childlike wonder the instant you receive nigh infinite power, you would have neither? Well the MC has a little of both, and if not using curse words is why you are saying he has the mentality of a 13 year old, then tell me, what being of great power needs to use curse words to get their point across? Other than weak ones. Half the novel is dialogue, not him praising himself, get it right, though again a normal person would have a power high, anyone who denies that is illogical, and praising himself is a part of that, he is still getting used to it. #4 He is not acting like Giratina or a 13 year old, he is acting like an immature, and inexperienced universal ruler, No normal 13 year old, would genocide a civilization with balance in mind, nor have no regrets, except for some minor inconvenience brought by it either. As he grows, and gains experience he will develop a more appropriate personality, and actions, the story is still going, I only stopped momentarily for other reasons outside of my control. #5 And finally if it was really as bad as you say it was, I can't believe you had to sacrifice yourself reading it to the end, word of advice, if you do not like something, nobody is forcing you to read it, and on top of that leaving such a bad review, at least do it right.
Spectre_Ouroboros:Now that how to write a real, quote on quote, negative review is out of the way let's get back to how you clearly do not seem to understand what you are reading: SPOILERS: #1 TOAA NEEDED a replacement Oblivion, the MC was the best fit, with the alterations the void made to his soul. #2 The only minor problem(which is actually not minor), that the mc solves are in another universe. Within his universe, everything he does has significance, especially since he is literally given responsibility over the balance of his universe, Skrull genocide, is a mayor thing. The only asgardian he beats up, and for very good reason if you know anything about young Odin, is Odin, (Writing this I realized I could have done a much better job in introducing him, his backstory, and what he has done, to garner the MC's initial disdain, see that is how you are supposed to feedback on a negative review). Aside from Odin, no Asgardian is harmed by the MC, in any case he is helping them. Making fun of Reed, are you a fan of his, because otherwise, you would know that is the least he deserves. Again another one that could have been better introduced and explained, though I do so in the comments. #3 The mentality of a 13 year old..., seriously. So you are telling me, that between being an overbearing dictator, and having childlike wonder the instant you receive nigh infinite power, you would have neither? Well the MC has a little of both, and if not using curse words is why you are saying he has the mentality of a 13 year old, then tell me, what being of great power needs to use curse words to get their point across? Other than weak ones. Half the novel is dialogue, not him praising himself, get it right, though again a normal person would have a power high, anyone who denies that is illogical, and praising himself is a part of that, he is still getting used to it. #4 He is not acting like Giratina or a 13 year old, he is acting like an immature, and inexperienced universal ruler, No normal 13 year old, would genocide a civilization with balance in mind, nor have no regrets, except for some minor inconvenience brought by it either. As he grows, and gains experience he will develop a more appropriate personality, and actions, the story is still going, I only stopped momentarily for other reasons outside of my control. #5 And finally if it was really as bad as you say it was, I can't believe you had to sacrifice yourself reading it to the end, word of advice, if you do not like something, nobody is forcing you to read it, and on top of that leaving such a bad review, at least do it right.
There is no need to cry and throw a tantrum. If I knew I was correcting a toddler, I would have tried to be even nicer, but oh well, mistakes were made. All I did was offer advice for criticism and correct your misinformation. If you can't handle criticism and correction, don't criticize in the first place.
BigBud:*Waaaaah* *Waaaaaaaah*image
If your novel was the same quality as your replies I wouldn’t be crying in the first place. You’re pretty funny ngl
Spectre_Ouroboros:There is no need to cry and throw a tantrum. If I knew I was correcting a toddler, I would have tried to be even nicer, but oh well, mistakes were made. All I did was offer advice for criticism and correct your misinformation. If you can't handle criticism and correction, don't criticize in the first place.
