Story is going good but sometimes it jumps from A to C. Generally I want to read with every update. There are lots of places to improve but for a light novel and a fanfiction it's a good one.
DaoistAutumn_rain
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ty for your honest rating 🤗🤗
After ch160 it became boring and went from A to Z then to G it goes everywhere also Zoro came from Konoha