Review Detail of Mr_Ostrich in Re:Villain

This review is based on first five chapters only. Writing wise, it's good and so is the stability of updates. The world development so far is well average but it's alright considering its just the initial few chapters. My only issue is the progression of the plot and character of the mc. I honestly don't see any depth in him. The first five chapters also felt slow and bland. What I am saying is I don't see a hook that makes me want to read further. (But I am pretty picky of what I read so that's that.) Overall, this has big potential. Good luck, author.