the Begging was honestly quite good but at the same time i kinda wish that you gave the husband and wife a name earlier on its still good though also the level of detail is quite good
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giốngImortal_Sleep:Thanks for the encouragement, I actually left his parents unnamed in the post moment. I'm going to let the reader know the parents' names at the same time as the protagonist to have a sense of secrecy and suspense and not be omniscient at all. Their names will also have a great impact on the work.