Review Detail of Hoku_1 in The Female Lead's Secret Life

I have to say I love the first chapter related to the committee such a cool hook for the story. Tho I don't know why the FL was thinking in brackets it's better to go the usual route for that. Also, the 3rd chapter was lacking a bit in descriptions of her actions and I got a little confused with the system as well. That's the review for now based on the chapters posted. However, your writing is good and should be a bit more descriptive but other than that the story's plot is engaging. Keep it up!