Review Detail of Kyrus in Hunter x Hunter: Start With A Sparkling Fruit

This ...is, without a doubt, the most Chinese chinese-fanfic I've ever read. The names are butchered, the personalities are 2 dimensional, everyone praises the MC every other line, every new character goes through the "face slapping" followed by "worship the genius" cliche, and the original world is just a playground for the author to insert himself to be a badass character. The only saving grace of this fic is that the world of hxh can carry the plot enough to make it barely readable enough for one to appreciate how cool a devil fruit in the world of Nen would be.