At the beginning the story was promising, Batman in Marvel, interesting, but as the plot develops and specifically the interactions between characters, a rapid decline in quality is noted. An example of this is the first interaction with MJ (not Mary Jane) it is absurd to think that a teenager would suddenly confess her feelings for a person with a complete stranger. In addition to the above, things happen in the story without prior explanation, suddenly Alfred is alive (even though in the first chapters it is said that he died) and in the same world as the protagonist Batman. Another thing I don't like is the incongruity with Batman's overall character revealing his identity as a vigilante the second time he meets someone. The concept is interesting, but if the author does not correct what seem to me to be these problems, I highly doubt that the story will reach many more chapters. I sincerely hope that I am wrong and that the author is able and willing to write more. Good luck.
Blibbert
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giốngI don't know if you're trying to defend the first comment or just telling the author to be more specific but the first comment literally does not know how to read well or is bypassing several chapters because his examples are invalid if he was truly reading the novel. For example, when I said that alfred was back alive, it looks like he did not read the chapter where First, it said it was an Android, a replica of the original. It was not until later that he was brought back to life by a powerful entity from the D.C. Universe, that was closing up the hole in between multiverses and the one where MJ confesses to a stranger for no reason is also a lie because the same chapter explains why that happened.
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