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I read 12 chapter. still plot has not started. only few useful and lot of useless plot and information. and it's slow too. mc is in constant denial of what he saw few times and he really lacks some IQ. no system yet nothing , just his everyday boring life going on with lot of dark bulshit.

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Thank you for the review. This is my attempt at building the world, the character, and the atmosphere. I do agree that the beginning of the novel is slow.