Review Detail of Rosy_cookie143 in Monsters Underneath

It's a really good rough draft for the first chapter! Few grammatical errors here and there but doesn't effect the story at all. Worldbuilding and character design/description could use a bit of work and it did feel a bit rushed for the plot twist and some minor repeats of events in different POVs that felt a little unnecessary. Overall i'm pretty hooked and i'm excited to see what happens next ^^