Review Detail of Spelloyal in What happened??

First, I thank you for your valuable time that you gave me by reading your article. Regarding your opinion, I will improve my writing more for you, thanks.

My review wasn't really about whether the story is good or bad and about how it's not clear if it's a fanfic since you didn't put in the synopsis or tag which anime/manga the fic is. If it's not a fic, you should really move your novel to the original novels category and if it's a fic you should really put a warning in the synopsis about which book/anime/manga this fic is.