Review Detail of ForsakenChild in In mha as Miquella the kind (MHA/Elden Ring)

disclaimer: im not good with english as english is my second language, and im not really that experienced with writing a review/critique writing this at chapter 10 Story Development: Pacing is kinda rush especially in chapter 10, Author could've expanded on the CPR as it's a purely original content, could've Miquella interact more with the other characters especially if he was interested in forming bonds and trust with his other classmates as stated in that chapter too that as a class president he wants to form that bond well considering he agreed on the restaurant offer, the media break-incident could be expanded well.. id let that slide because author probably didn't want it because you could have just watched/read the original series then so thats okay.. anyways from early chapters fo now it feels kinda rushed. (2.5/5) writing Quality: Theres no awkward dialogues, as far as im concerned. (4/5) Character Design: mc along with his sister are quite bland right now, theres no moment where im particularly very impressed by him for now. (3/5) World background: with japan and all and wirh the mha having a lot of things going on there, author could've expanded the story from the original to his own original fanfic where it deviates greatly from the original. overall its just the same with s few add ons. (3.5/5) update Stability: unstable to say the least, Well with authors education status its kinds unredrstable so i wont be too hard here (4/5) overall: 3.6/5 score